IELTS Writing Task 2 Ecotourism is now defined as responsible travel to natural areas that conserves the environment. What are the advantages of ecotourism? How can we make ecotourism more popular?

In
the
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recent times, there has been great awareness created about
Ecotourism
. The only way to preserve
the
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nature
and wild places is
Ecotourism
.
This
essay will emphasize
on
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the advantages of
Ecotourism
along with how can we make
ecotourism
more popular.
Firstly
, the major advantage of
Ecotourism
is that it will help the government to save the environment as well as
nature
will be maintained.
However
,
this
needs to be enlightened as much as possible by the government to tourists. So that, they can follow certain protocols.
Secondly
, the other advantage of
Ecotourism
is that tourists can enjoy
the
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nature
and landscape without missing the adventures, relaxation and enjoyment.
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, there are multiple
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wildlife

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wild life
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wildlife

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sanctuaries in
world
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a world
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where tourists can enjoy the sanctuaries without any problem. In the end, saving
nature
is a must and
ecotourism
helps to achieve
the
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his. I reckon that it's prominent and everyone's responsibility to make sure that our environment is safe and preserved for future generations.
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