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IELTS Writing Task 2 Ecotourism is now defined as responsible travel to natural areas that conserves the environment. What are the advantages of ecotourism? How can we make ecotourism more popular?

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recent times, there has been great awareness created about
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. The only way to preserve
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nature
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 and wild places is
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the advantages of
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 along with how can we make
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 more popular.
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, the major advantage of
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 is that it will help the government to save the environment as well as
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 will be maintained.
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 needs to be enlightened as much as possible by the government to tourists. So that, they can follow certain protocols.
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, the other advantage of
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 is that tourists can enjoy
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nature
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 and landscape without missing the adventures, relaxation and enjoyment.
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wildlife
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wild life
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 sanctuaries in
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 where tourists can enjoy the sanctuaries without any problem. In the end, saving
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 is a must and
ecotourism
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 helps to achieve
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his. I reckon that it's prominent and everyone's responsibility to make sure that our environment is safe and preserved for future generations.
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