Many people believe that social networking sites ( such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?

Social media plays a vital role in everyone's life nowadays.
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impression on the residents and the communities. I will discuss not only
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side but
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thought as per bellow paragraphs. On the initial level, Facebook is very useful for those who are living in a different country. With the help of
this
networking
site
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people
started to make new connections and stay in
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on their convenient
time
.
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, I joined a Facebook group of a college; located in Canada, to get more information on daily updates and get a
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rented apartment as well. I got all the things perfectly and they added me
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a group when moving to Canada.
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humans to make their life easier without
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of anyone.
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, some
people
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party and inviting a problem. Other adults are available all the
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social media just to irritate the wise persons and trapped into
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fraud. On the
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of
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survey, 60% of students created fake accounts or more than one accounts for their fun purpose, so
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for all the citizens. In conclusion,
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is
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always proved as honest if
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any one
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does not select
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one. I believe, if
people
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time
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good work,
then
everything will turn into their best way. Everyone can use chatting networking sites to stay connected and help
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all needy ones.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • erosion
  • face-to-face
  • interactions
  • privacy concerns
  • data breaches
  • misinformation
  • polarize
  • cyberbullying
  • online harassment
  • procrastination
  • productivity
  • social isolation
  • dissemination
  • breeding ground
  • vast amounts
  • personal information
  • mental health
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