. You have been accepted by a university in Canada. Before moving to Canada, you want to gather some information from International Officer. Write to him about your needs. In your letter • introduce yourself • inquire about accommodation options • seek information on Student Discount Card

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to gather some information about
accomodation
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accommodation
options. My name is Nikita;
student
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my student
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ID is YH766554. I have enrolled myself for a full-time Business Studies graduation course in
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University
Univeristy
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the Univeristy
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of
Toronoto
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Toronto
for 2021 intake. At the onset, I would like to inquire about
accomodation
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accommodation
accommodations
facilities for international students in
college
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a college
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hostel
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hostels
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.
In
addition
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the room amenities
either
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are either
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shared or single, and food services
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are near
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near
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nearby
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by
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apply
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the hostel.
Furthermore
,I need information about student discount
card
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cards
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and
its
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their
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advantages and on the services where I can avail discounts being a scholar. I
soilict
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solicit
your cooperation and waiting for your response. Yours faithfully, Nikita.
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