Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? what other measures do you think might be effective?

Traffic and pollution

problems

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have become an everyday topic of the recent world. Some

people

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consider that raising the

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of

petrol

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is the best method to get rid of these

problems

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, I disagree.

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essay will explain why increasing

petrol

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price would not be enough to tackle

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problems

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, rather it should incorporate some other measures as well. Surging the

cost

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of

petrol

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alone would not solve the

problems

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of traffic and environmental pollution.

People

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use

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the car

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car

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for luxury, comfort and convenience of

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, which anyway would always be considered regardless of the

petrol

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cost

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because, everyone wants to reach

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their destination

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an expected

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and with comfort, but these can only be achieved using personal cars. The other option would be to use public transport but

people

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don’t consider using it because of it’s being overcrowded and mostly late for the destination because they require to wait longer at the station.

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, it is obvious that convenience would be prioritized more than the elevated

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, adding two other factors with increased

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price can lead to a better solution.

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one would be to improve

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transport system. Usually, there

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less transportation available than

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is required, so increasing the number of public vehicles would be essential and

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limiting the passengers in a bus or train to a

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considerable

number would be preferred. These would solve the

problems

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related to overcrowding and waiting

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as there will be more transports in small intervals. Another factor would be to implement some rules related to the number of

people

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allowed per vehicle. If the government authority implies some rules to the capacity of minimum passengers allowed in a vehicle,

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people

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will not consider having more than one car in a single household. In conclusion,

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, congestion and environmental pollutions are a

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topic of recent

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, proper steps by the responsible authorities can lead to an expected solution to these

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. Increasing

petrol

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price along with the proper transportation system and appropriate rules can eventually solve these

problems

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