Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

The given diagram demonstrates the process of recycling the used
glass
bottles
.
This
process is consist of three stages, it starts with collecting the
bottles
and ends with delivering
thme
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them
the
theme

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to the
superarkets
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supermarkets
supermarket

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. In the beginning, the fabrication process starts with the very basic step of finding the
bottles
and
them
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then

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collecting them to a fixed point and
then
trasporting
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transporting

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them to carry out the main procedure. In the
second
stage, we
first
wash them with high-pressure water and
then
we take them to
glass
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factory to break them into
the
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small pieces. After that, we burn them in
furnace
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under
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the
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temperature of 600 C - 800C. Once with heat the
glass
, we get a liquid form of the recycled
bottles
. Now, we have two liquid
glass
solutions one is
of
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recycled liquid
glass
and another one is
of
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new liquid
glass
.
However
, both the liquid solution goes through the same moulding procedure to obtain
proper
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shape.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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