Some people believe that it is good for students to have the same teacher for several years. Others think students benefit more from having new teachers each year. Which do you think is better? Give specific reasons to support your opinion.

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some people argued that it is more beneficial for pupils to have one tutor during their education period while there are some crowd that believes the advantages of having new

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in my ,perspective it is more beneficial to experience new

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each term,

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can gain more knowledge and experience by having a new

instructor

each year. ,

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each high educated torture has a

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different

range of abilities and

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to their academic background and it results to learn different methods and skills each year from different teachers that

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can lead them to be able and prepared to work with

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for university. The

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benefit of having a new teacher is that young students are not still mature enough emotionally and mentally to be independent and

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the same

instructor

for years can lead them to be dependent on her/him and

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their mental health if junior can not experience independency in young ages,

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they would not be able to work and think independently. to conclude,pupils can benefit from the new teacher for each year in comparison with the same torture for years and

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can build independency and skilful students that are handy for society.