Living in the countryside is better than living in the city. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#countryside #city

Some

people

hold the

believe

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that it is better to accommodate in rural

areas

instead

of urban

areas

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cities

offer

lot

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of benefits

such

job

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and

education

;

however

, I believe that

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one

can easily meet neat and clean environment at

countyside

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countryside

. I partially agree with both sides and will discuss my

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view points

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upcoming

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paragraphs. On the

one

side, living in the urban side ,benefits are considerable.

Firstly

every

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one

can easily get

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in the

cities

because most

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industries are located

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over there, so job opportunities are more in the

cities

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people

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things according to their requirements from stores , shops and malls, they do not need to go

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long

distance

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to meet their needs .

Moreover

education

centre's are

also

cities

one

can get higher

education

easily, while in the countryside

people

face difficulty

to get

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education

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, a survey was conducted and seen that

people

who

resides

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cities

, their children got more marks as

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to rural children, due to coaching

centers

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. On the other side, life in rural

areas

is more legitimate. Primarily,

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environmental

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is free from pollution in

countryside

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because there

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no industries and less traffic as compared to

cities

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people

plants

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more trees because they have free land , which helps to maintain

ecosystem

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. Secondarily,

people

have

lot

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of free time , they communicate with each other, which develops their good relationships with other ,

also

it reduces their mental stress and they rarely suffered from depression. To justify it, it was seen that in rural

areas

people

are more healthy as compared to urban masses. To conclude,

although

cities

offer many facilities to their residents;

however

countryside

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better

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to live it maintains physical and mental health

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people

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noise pollution
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Living in the countryside is better than living in the city. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Fully explain your ideas

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