Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume to less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

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of nutrient

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have high glucose

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, which is the cause of many health issues. Some believe that a lift in the prices of

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ought to be mandatory in order to discourage people from consuming them. I strongly disagree with

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view on the grounds that it will not have the desired effect on

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consumption

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, similar cases of using

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as a factor to reduce

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of unhealthy

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have all failed miserably. Consumer behaviour is affected by

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is definitely one of them.

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, when it comes to

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that stimulate

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addictive behaviour the impact of

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is minimal. The most notable examples are alcohol and tobacco. Many countries have already implemented various taxes and

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hikes on these

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but did not manage to reduce

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to healthy standards.

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, we need to look at sugary

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the same way.

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they may not seem as unhealthy and detrimental as cigarettes and alcohol, they create the same effect on the brain when it comes to consuming them.

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, as many

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and drink manufactured goods contain

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of

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, raising the prices would create an economic backlash. A typical family’s basket of goods will certainly have a good number of

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that are considered

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sugary and

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unhealthy. If the

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of all these goods

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raised, the country will experience

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inflation.

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, high

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consumption

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is too widespread today to be tackled with

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measures. To summarize, food and drinks that are deemed

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unhealthy due to high

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level

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are very common in

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diets. Some suggest a

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raise to reduce glucose

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. In my opinion,

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, reducing the

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of these

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is not possible by increasing their prices.