Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume to less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?
A large
of
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number
of nutrient Change the article
a number
the number
products
have high glucose level
, which is the cause of many health issues. Some believe that a lift in the prices of Fix the agreement mistake
levels
such
sweet products
ought to be mandatory in order to discourage people from consuming them. I strongly disagree with this
view on the grounds that it will not have the desired effect on sugar
consumption
.
Firstly
, similar cases of using price
as a factor to reduce consumption
of unhealthy products
have all failed miserably. Consumer behaviour is affected by number
of variables, and Change the article
a number
the number
price
is definitely one of them. Add an article
the price
However
, when it comes to products
that stimulate an
addictive behaviour the impact of Correct article usage
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price
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raises
raise
is minimal. The most notable examples are alcohol and tobacco. Many countries have already implemented various taxes and Correct your spelling
rise
price
hikes on these products
,
but did not manage to reduce Remove the comma
apply
consumption
to healthy standards. Therefore
, we need to look at sugary products
the same way. Although
they may not seem as unhealthy and detrimental as cigarettes and alcohol, they create the same effect on the brain when it comes to consuming them.
Secondly
, as many food
and drink manufactured goods contain Change to a plural noun
foods
high
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a high
level
of Fix the agreement mistake
levels
sugar
, raising the prices would create an economic backlash. A typical family’s basket of goods will certainly have a good number of products
that are considered as
sugary and Change preposition
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thus
unhealthy. If the price
of all these goods are
raised, the country will experience Change the verb form
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an
inflation. Remove the article
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Therefore
, high sugar
consumption
is too widespread today to be tackled with such
measures.
To summarize, food and drinks that are deemed as
unhealthy due to high Change preposition
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sugar
level
are very common in Fix the agreement mistake
levels
every day’s
diets. Some suggest a Correct your spelling
everyday’s
price
raise to reduce glucose consumption
. In my opinion, however
, reducing the consumption
of these products
is not possible by increasing their prices.Submitted by vandad1703 on
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