Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume to less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

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of nutrient
products
have high glucose
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, which is the cause of many health issues. Some believe that a lift in the prices of
such
sweet
products
ought to be mandatory in order to discourage people from consuming them. I strongly disagree with
this
view on the grounds that it will not have the desired effect on
sugar
consumption
.
Firstly
, similar cases of using
price
as a factor to reduce
consumption
of unhealthy
products
have all failed miserably. Consumer behaviour is affected by
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of variables, and
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is definitely one of them.
However
, when it comes to
products
that stimulate
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addictive behaviour the impact of
price
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is minimal. The most notable examples are alcohol and tobacco. Many countries have already implemented various taxes and
price
hikes on these
products
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but did not manage to reduce
consumption
to healthy standards.
Therefore
, we need to look at sugary
products
the same way.
Although
they may not seem as unhealthy and detrimental as cigarettes and alcohol, they create the same effect on the brain when it comes to consuming them.
Secondly
, as many
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and drink manufactured goods contain
high
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level
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of
sugar
, raising the prices would create an economic backlash. A typical family’s basket of goods will certainly have a good number of
products
that are considered
as
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sugary and
thus
unhealthy. If the
price
of all these goods
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raised, the country will experience
an
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inflation.
Therefore
, high
sugar
consumption
is too widespread today to be tackled with
such
measures. To summarize, food and drinks that are deemed
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unhealthy due to high
sugar
level
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are very common in
every day’s
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diets. Some suggest a
price
raise to reduce glucose
consumption
. In my opinion,
however
, reducing the
consumption
of these
products
is not possible by increasing their prices.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • health problems
  • manufactured food and drink products
  • sugary products
  • excessive sugar consumption
  • discourage
  • promote
  • healthier choices
  • reduce
  • increased taxes
  • fund
  • health education
  • prevention programs
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