Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent to you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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as healthcare, education and commerce are necessary for

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the progress

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of developing

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. Meanwhile, more prosperous

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ought to assist the poorer

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in these

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. I generally disagree with

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opinion in that every government is responsible for the well-being of

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people, regardless of their wealth and global status.

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it is virtuous and amiable for richer governments to help poorer ones in development, they are not responsible for other

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’ advancements. Wealthier

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could assist developing

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by providing

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or blueprints of progress in different

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, but they should not take direct responsibility in moving these aspects forward.

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could even be deemed as meddling in foreign affairs, and it could raise questions about the

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of the country receiving aid.

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, the developing

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need localized knowledge and

expertise

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for sustainable and long-term progress and not just foreign intervention.

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, many African

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suffer from

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of

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healthcare

system

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need funds and foreign

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it

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needs local trained professionals and executives.

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, improvements in

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areas

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in poorer

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could benefit the world at large and

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it is in the interest of richer

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. Considering the fact that

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the economy

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is a global and inter-related structure, any enhancements in the less developed

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will eventually have

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a positive

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impact

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the developed

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.

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, a stable economy with a reliable health system will reduce migration from less developed

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; an issue that wealthier

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are spending millions to tackle. In conclusion, richer

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should be advised not to take any responsibility in the development of poorer

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’ infrastructure and economy.

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, it is beneficial for them to provide offshore assistance and

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for long-term sustainability.