Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent to you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Enhancement in

areas

such

as healthcare, education and commerce are necessary for

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the progress

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of developing

countries

. Meanwhile, more prosperous

countries

ought to assist the poorer

nations

in these

areas

. I generally disagree with

this

opinion in that every government is responsible for the well-being of

their

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people, regardless of their wealth and global status.

Although

it is virtuous and amiable for richer governments to help poorer ones in development, they are not responsible for other

nations

’ advancements. Wealthier

countries

could assist developing

nations

by providing

expertise

or blueprints of progress in different

areas

, but they should not take direct responsibility in moving these aspects forward.

This

could even be deemed as meddling in foreign affairs, and it could raise questions about the

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independence

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independency

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independence

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of the country receiving aid.

Moreover

, the developing

countries

need localized knowledge and

expertise

for sustainable and long-term progress and not just foreign intervention.

For example

, many African

countries

suffer from

lack

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a lack

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of

sufficient

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a sufficient

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healthcare

system

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systems

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. Not only does

this

need funds and foreign

expertise

,

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but,

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it

also

needs local trained professionals and executives.

Nevertheless

, improvements in

such

areas

in poorer

nations

could benefit the world at large and

therefore

it is in the interest of richer

countries

. Considering the fact that

economy

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the economy

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is a global and inter-related structure, any enhancements in the less developed

nations

will eventually have

positive

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a positive

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impact

for

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the developed

countries

.

For instance

, a stable economy with a reliable health system will reduce migration from less developed

countries

; an issue that wealthier

countries

are spending millions to tackle. In conclusion, richer

countries

should be advised not to take any responsibility in the development of poorer

nations

’ infrastructure and economy.

However

, it is beneficial for them to provide offshore assistance and

expertise

for long-term sustainability.