The education you receive from your family is more important than the education you receive from school. To what extend do you agree with this statement and why?

Education

is always the top concern of countries. The government has

also

invested heavily in facilities and infrastructure, applying more modern teaching methods to schools to create the best conditions for students. Nowadays,

parents

are

also

very focused on

education

because they want their

children

to develop the most comprehensive. So

education

from home or school is both important. But I think that

education

from the family is a decisive factor for a child's development as I shall go on to show.

Firstly

, the formation of a child's personality is greatly influenced by

education

from family.

Children

will be optimistic, active and lively if

parents

let them have fun and always answer their questions in a fun way. The love from the family will build a child who cares, empathizes, and helps those around them.

Also

, responsibility forms through small things

such

as helping

parents

with housework or maybe babysitting.

Secondly

, one of the most important things to be a useful person is social skills.

Parents

teach

children

politeness, listening, and understanding through words and actions in daily life.

Children

often imitate, so they will follow what they hear and see. If family members behave politely and listen to each other, the

children

will do the same.

In addition

,

parents

should educate their

children

to be independent and resilient so that no matter what difficulties they face, they will not think of relying on anyone and be strong to overcome them.

However

, it is important for

children

to receive

education

from school. They can learn knowledge, teamwork and have friends – it’s the good relationships for them. But I think qualifications from school is most concerned

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it’s too hard to apply for

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without it. And about knowledge, you can learn it from friends, family or training

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Therefore

,

education

from the family is really necessary. In conclusion, in my opinion,

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is indispensable because of its contribution to the formation of personality and thinking of

children

.

Hence

, families should focus more on the

education

of their

children

.