To be labelled a ‘Work of Art’, a painting, sculpture or other art form should display certain qualities that are unique. However, over the past century there has been a decline in the quality of prize-winning artwork and it is now possible for quite ordinary pieces of art to be labelled ‘masterpieces ’ whilst true works of art pass unnoticed. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the present era, the taste of

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regarding artworks

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immensely changed resulting in many ordinary

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pieces

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entitled as masterpieces while true

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go unnoticed for the lack of evaluation amid thousands of them. The essay below tends to explain why I agree with the aforementioned context.

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with, nowadays,

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are extremely busy

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living their own lives, thereby, significantly dwindling the number of

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art loving

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people

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. To illustrate, the burden of work and the will to have a luxurious life is so immense on the public's shoulder that going to museums or

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galleries seem apathetic to them. A huge proportion of common

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feel buying these creative

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to hang on their house's walls and preserve in showcases is a huge waste of their hard-earned

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. They think it only suits the affluent

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.

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, folks these days, do not have great knowledge about all these.

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, any painting that has little colours is appreciated and liked by the public.

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, busy schedules, desire to not waste

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and less knowledge have caused ordinary

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of

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to be labelled as masterpieces.

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, the lack of acknowledgement by the public, have generated

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feeling of apathy in many famous and talented

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.

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, indifference towards

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profession has caused these

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to abandon that occupation and choose other careers in their life to earn

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and to become successful.

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, artworks are taught in schools as an extra-curricular activity and there is no added importance to it

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because the number of competitions is very less,

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, nobody is interested in joining it.

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, the rise of the feeling of apathy in

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and the dwindling rate of

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lead to true

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of

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go unnoticed. To conclude, the essay explains the reasons for my agreement to the context that in present days, ordinary

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of

art

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are labelled as masterpieces, whilst true

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of

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go unnoticed. Because folks are busy with their

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lives and consider it a waste of

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,

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, they do not have much knowledge about all these.

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,

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interest because of less competition.