To be labelled a ‘Work of Art’, a painting, sculpture or other art form should display certain qualities that are unique. However, over the past century there has been a decline in the quality of prize-winning artwork and it is now possible for quite ordinary pieces of art to be labelled ‘masterpieces ’ whilst true works of art pass unnoticed. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the present era, the taste of

people

regarding artworks

have

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immensely changed resulting in many ordinary

art

pieces

to be

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entitled as masterpieces while true

pieces

go unnoticed for the lack of evaluation amid thousands of them. The essay below tends to explain why I agree with the aforementioned context.

To begin

with, nowadays,

people

are extremely busy

in

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living their own lives, thereby, significantly dwindling the number of

art loving

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people

. To illustrate, the burden of work and the will to have a luxurious life is so immense on the public's shoulder that going to museums or

art

galleries seem apathetic to them. A huge proportion of common

people

feel buying these creative

works

to hang on their house's walls and preserve in showcases is a huge waste of their hard-earned

money

. They think it only suits the affluent

people

.

In addition

, folks these days, do not have great knowledge about all these.

Consequently

, any painting that has little colours is appreciated and liked by the public.

Thus

, busy schedules, desire to not waste

money

and less knowledge have caused ordinary

pieces

of

art

to be labelled as masterpieces.

Furthermore

, the lack of acknowledgement by the public, have generated

the

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feeling of apathy in many famous and talented

artists

.

For instance

, indifference towards

this

profession has caused these

artists

to abandon that occupation and choose other careers in their life to earn

money

and to become successful.

Moreover

, artworks are taught in schools as an extra-curricular activity and there is no added importance to it

,

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because the number of competitions is very less,

therefore

, nobody is interested in joining it.

Hence

, the rise of the feeling of apathy in

artists

and the dwindling rate of

competitions

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have

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lead to true

works

of

art

go unnoticed. To conclude, the essay explains the reasons for my agreement to the context that in present days, ordinary

pieces

of

art

are labelled as masterpieces, whilst true

works

of

art

go unnoticed. Because folks are busy with their

works

lives and consider it a waste of

money

,

also

, they do not have much knowledge about all these.

Likewise

,

artists

are

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loosing

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interest because of less competition.