To be labelled a ‘Work of Art’, a painting, sculpture or other art form should display certain qualities that are unique. However, over the past century there has been a decline in the quality of prize-winning artwork and it is now possible for quite ordinary pieces of art to be labelled ‘masterpieces ’ whilst true works of art pass unnoticed. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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In the present era, the taste of
people
regarding artworks have
immensely changed resulting in many ordinary Change the verb form
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art
pieces
to be
entitled as masterpieces while true Change the verb form
being
pieces
go unnoticed for the lack of evaluation amid thousands of them. The essay below tends to explain why I agree with the aforementioned context.
To begin
with, nowadays, people
are extremely busy in
living their own lives, thereby, significantly dwindling the number of Change preposition
apply
art loving
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art-loving
people
. To illustrate, the burden of work and the will to have a luxurious life is so immense on the public's shoulder that going to museums or art
galleries seem apathetic to them. A huge proportion of common people
feel buying these creative works
to hang on their house's walls and preserve in showcases is a huge waste of their hard-earned money
. They think it only suits the affluent people
. In addition
, folks these days, do not have great knowledge about all these. Consequently
, any painting that has little colours is appreciated and liked by the public. Thus
, busy schedules, desire to not waste money
and less knowledge have caused ordinary pieces
of art
to be labelled as masterpieces.
Furthermore
, the lack of acknowledgement by the public, have generated the
feeling of apathy in many famous and talented Correct article usage
a
artists
. For instance
, indifference towards this
profession has caused these artists
to abandon that occupation and choose other careers in their life to earn money
and to become successful. Moreover
, artworks are taught in schools as an extra-curricular activity and there is no added importance to it,
because the number of competitions is very less, Remove the comma
apply
therefore
, nobody is interested in joining it. Hence
, the rise of the feeling of apathy in artists
and the dwindling rate of competitions
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competition
have
lead to true Add the particle
tohave
works
of art
go unnoticed.
To conclude, the essay explains the reasons for my agreement to the context that in present days, ordinary pieces
of art
are labelled as masterpieces, whilst true works
of art
go unnoticed. Because folks are busy with their works
lives and consider it a waste of money
, also
, they do not have much knowledge about all these. Likewise
, artists
are Replace the word
losing
loosing
interest because of less competition.Correct your spelling
losing
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