some people think that computer games are good for children's development other think it is bad discuss both the views and give your opinion

It is irrefutable that in

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contemporary era

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gaming is

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topic. Some individuals opine that

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gaming is good for

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growth of

children

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deemed that it has

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This

essay will intend to analyse both perspectives with credible

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However

, I side with

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view. To commence with, There are two main reasons why community believe in former view,

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nub is that due to

computer

games

, Not only

children

can learn typing skill with enjoyment but

also

some intense situations in

games

leads

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to

effect

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in positive ways

such

as focus, calmness and how to react in under pressure.

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reason is that nowadays lots of

games

are multiple player

games

so that an

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interaction

with various

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mind sets

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of people, as a repercussion, the maturity level increased via communication. To understand deeply, Some

computer

games

have a role, so in that

role

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player

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have

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to deal with some events,

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thing can boot of

children

’s overall development. Altogether, these are some viable points which we can not keep away.

On the other hand

, those, who

are opine

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that

computer

game is bad for

children

, they

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following reasons,

first

and foremost is addiction, To understand

this

matter deeply Due to

computer

games

children

can not focus on academic, even though they spend time in limit because according to research, 85% of under 10 years

children

the neurology

is not fully develop

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at that age, as a consequence, they can easily distract even a small amount of environment generate. Another point is that there are some

computer

games

which can

leads

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to psychological impacts on

children

such

as annoying, impatient and . so altogether these are some

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we can not ignore. In conclusion, I would like to reiterate that,

Although

computer

games

plays

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a bit of role in

improvement

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of

under age

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, some serious impact which leads to far away of

those merit

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and more negative impact generate, so I firmly disagree with

this

statement.