1. In some countries around the world men and women are having babies late in life. What are the reasons? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
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a threat to women heath during Change the verb form
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pregnancy
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are more
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concerned
carrer
development or living expenses than Correct your spelling
career
number
of babies. Change the article
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involved
:
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child
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of their
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, couples intend to Correct your spelling
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further
continue their studies and achieve a point where they can actually stand on their own feet.Linking Words
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In conclusion
although
there are some positive aspects of having children late in life the negatives points outweigh the positives ones. It is a great idea to mutually decide and move a step ahead because it is a lifetime decision.Linking Words
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