Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects. But others believe that teenage should focus on the subject that they are best at or that they find the most interest

These days

students

below seventeen years of age have to keep themselves academically focused in order to get into prestigious institutions for their undergraduate studies. Some people believe that all the

subjects

taught in the

school

should be studied with equal concentration while others feel that the

students

must devote their major part of the time on

subjects

that they would like to pursue in future or which would interest them. In

this

essay ,I will look at both sides of the argument and give my opinion.

First

of all,

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students

these days are trained to handle a wide variety of

subjects

at schools.

This

aspect helps them to handle pressure and perform well in their academics. All

subjects

are equally important in terms of knowledge ,so

students

tend to learn the art of multi-tasking which would help them to pass the exam with flying colours.

For example

:In order to get admitted to Cambridge University, candidates must have an aggregate of ninety-five per cent with English as their

first

language.

This

would help them assess the ability of a candidate to write and speak English. If the

students

have not performed well in English or have not opted for the subject at

school

,

then

it would become impossible to get into

such

a renowned university.

On the other hand

,there is a common belief that

students

out-perform only in those

subjects

for which they have a liking or that they would like to make it a career in future. In

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some schools encourage

such

a kind of education , where they are entitled to choose courses that they wish to study.

This

process of learning would help them master the subject and do extremely well in it.

As a result

,it would help them secure a place for themselves in the university that they wish to study. In conclusion,

although

it is a common thought that children should concentrate on all the

subjects

learnt in the

school

while some strata of the society feel that

school

students

should dedicate more time on

subjects

that they consider their favourite.Personally.I think teenagers have a lot of capacity to learn ,store and retain things that they have learnt in

school

and so they should focus on all the

subjects

.