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Despite improvements in vehicle technology, there are still large numbers of road accidents. Explain some of the causes of these accidents and suggest some measures that could be taken to address the problem.

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Road
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accidents
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 today take a shockingly high number of lives every day around the world.
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Although
 technological enhancements have
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 driving experience, they have yet to omit hazardous incidents. There are numerous reasons that lead to
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, and
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 essay will elaborate on them, as well as some measures that can be taken to solve the issue.
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accidents
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 occur for various reasons involving
drivers
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 and regulatory bodies that govern the traffic.
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 and foremost, it is well accepted that the major reason for car
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 is speeding.
Drivers
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 who pass the speed limit may have a difficult time controlling their
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 at any time. Another reason for
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 is careless driving by some. It is not solely
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 who speed who impose the threat of
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, but
drivers
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 who do not follow the rules or are not sufficiently skilled can
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 cause
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.
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, in some
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 there are
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 designs that are not standard and could cause confusion for
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. Solving these problems is possible by applying some of these recommendations.
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, the price of speed tickets should be hiked. Penalising
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 who surpass the speed limit at each lane with a lofty amount can have a huge impact on the number of
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 injuries.
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, training centres need to
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implement
 more rigid discipline for new
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. Simultaneously, longer hours of training should be required to obtain a driving license in order to make sure more
drivers
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 acquire the necessary theoretical and practical knowledge and skills.
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, faulty
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 designs and signs must be dealt with. To summarize, vehicle accident is
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 one of the most detrimental
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occurrence
 globally. Science and technology
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 evolved significantly over the years, and
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the vehicle
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 industry has enjoyed many noble concepts.
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,
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 still happen on a daily basis due to human mistakes and poor regulation. In order to tackle
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 issue, governments ought to implement more strict laws on driving
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 and remove faulty designs in urban areas.
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