Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good while others think there are disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion

These days,

sport

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expos have gained

a

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enormous awareness from

people

across the world.

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, various

companies

use

the

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sport

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events

as a channel to advertise their

products

to their targets, which is a promising method for advertisement, whereas others contradict

that is

a silly idea to be a sponsor of the sports. In

this

essay, I will explore the positive and negative aspects of it, and express my perspective toward

this

overview.

First

of all, the benefit of posting

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an advertisement

the advertisement

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advertisement

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advertisements

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on the

sport

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expos

such

as the football

worldcup

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WorldCup

world cup

, Olympic expo, and Superbowl is that the messages will be received by a million

of

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people

all over the world via TV and others.

This

can make

people

interested in your

products

over the night, and

this

will make a substantial profit to the

companies

.

Secondly

, as a vast budget is advocated

to

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the athletes, they have more facilities and

equipments

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equipment

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to enhance the performance and to work harder. For

this

reason, it means that you

also

support your

favorite

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athletes.

However

, advertising on

sport

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events

can have some disadvantages.

Companies

need to spend

innumerable

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amount

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of money for being showed just a few minutes on the program, which may not be worthwhile.

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, for advertising in

Superbowl

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the Superbowl

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expo, a

minutes

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of the advertisement is worth more than 1 million dollars, while other channels

such

as Facebook and

Instragram

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Instagram

, which is

also

popular among individuals, cost only 10,000 dollars for promoting many of information.

Moreover

,

this

can be harmful to the consumers, who misunderstand that every

products

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product

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promoting in the

sport

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sports

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events

are healthy.

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, Coca-cola always

place

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places

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their

products

in front of

the

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famous football players

such

as Ronaldo and Messi when they are in an interview, which is tricky because it contains a lot of sugar, and it is bad for health. In conclusion, in my opinion, promoting

products

via

sport

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events

contributes to more dissemination among customers, and athletes get the benefit from the

sponsers

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sponsors

.

In

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the other

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other hand

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, it may not be worth

for

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some

companies

as it's too expensive, and

this

can make

people

misconceived.