Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Music
is the universal language. music
can bring people
of various cultures and ages. music
is admired by many people
all over the world
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music
is the best way to bring people
close to each other also
there is no barrier between any culture or ages.
fist of all, there are always people
who are in any culture or age that they love to listen to music
. there by
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the origin
tune
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the tune
hence
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well
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people
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listening
music
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songs are more popular all around the Correct your spelling
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music
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,secondly
music
has not any restriction on singing songs that are from another area or nation.
besides
, people
of any age are enjoying music
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world
, for ,example a Sri Lankan young girl who was released
a Sinhala song and that song has become more popular in the USA now. and that song is played by a street girl with her violin. Change the verb form
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Therefore
music
can bring any age together. and also
many musical functions such
as concerts and music
nights will be held by
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apply
world
. and also
people
are coming from different ages and places come to the show. thereby bring people
close to each other.
in conclusion,however
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i
believe that Change the capitalization
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music
can bring people
to get together and the best way to enjoying the whole world
without any barrier.Submitted by vinodnavinda9 on
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