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Now the machine is very complex, and a lot of difficult work is automated. Do the benefits of machine automation outweigh the drawbacks?

#machine #work #automation
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dependence on
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the machine
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machine
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 to
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 a
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 day to day
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. Machines are made up of complex
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algorithms
 that make onerous jobs quite simple. In
this
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 we are going to explore if the
automation
 of jobs benefits outweigh the drawbacks.
Firstly
, there
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 benefits of machine
automation
 as it reduces a
lot
 of errors especially
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.
For instance
, these days we have automated programs that do a
lot
 of difficult
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 precisely in seconds. Which
also
 leads to saving a
lot
 of time and resources spend on a single task. The effectiveness and efficiency of the job
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 multiplied since the era of
automation
. There has been a comprehensive revamp of businesses in the wake of technological advancement. Contrastingly, the process of
automation
 has lead to enormous loss of livelihood.
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,
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 amount of factory labour has been replaced by machines that do the job quickly with
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 errors. It is irrefutable that people are finding it hard to get jobs if they
donot
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do not
don't
 have knowledge of machines.
Automation
 of processes has
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the
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manual labour. The capitalist
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 condoning the labour market for new enhanced machinery. In conclusion, the benefits of machine
automation
 outweigh the drawbacks as there is monumentous nexus between
automation
 and
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 of significant outputs through
use
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the use
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 of the enhanced processes in
timely
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 and structured manner with little or no inaccuracy. It
also
 puts resources to efficient use and generates
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 amount of output for the
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 task.
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