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Some people believe that a crime is a result of social problems and poverty, others think that crime is a result of bad person's nature. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Nowadays, the biggest problem faced by
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society is
crime
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. Some individuals hold the opinion that
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crime
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consequence of civil issues and deprivation;
however
 others think that it is the result of bad company. In
this
 essay, I will discuss both sides along with my opinion which will be highlighted in the forthcoming paragraphs. On the one side,
people
 who claim that
crime
 is
result
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the result
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 of social concerns and poverty because to complete basic needs,
people
 who are unable to
fulfill
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 the basic needs of their family,
they
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indulge in wrongdoing to earn money, so that they can buy food for
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family.
Also
, when a person committed a
crime
 once after that society never gives them respect , and never give chance for improvement,
as a result
, they enforced to doing wrong.
In addition
 to
this
, unemployment is
also
 prominent social
concerns
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, if youngsters would have work , they do not provide attention to
offense
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 and always stays away from
crime
. On the other side and according to
me
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, some
people
 think that
crime
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 rate is the influence of bad
persons
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 company.
Firstly
, if a person
have
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friend circle who indulge in
crime
, they
also
 encourage them to commit a
crime
. To justify it, a recent study has been shown that 70%
people
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 following the habits of their peer group.
Secondly
,
people
 became
workaholic
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, they most of time in office and their watch violent episodes in their
absent
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 and
then
 try it in their life, so it can be
influence
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the influence
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 of media. To conclude,
although
 society responsible for enforcing
people
 for misdoing,
person
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a person
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 is
also
 influencing by their company in which they spend most of
time
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the time
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.
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