An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poor countries to work in developed countries . what problems does this cause . what can be done to deal with this situation.

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A great number of highly educated

professionals

like doctors and teachers migrating to developed

countries

,leaving behind unprivileged

countries

for work in

such

countries

which causes lots of problems in their native places ,I am going to elaborate problems and solutions for

this

notion in

this

essay. Brain drain is the win-win condition for the developed counties as they are getting readymade

professionals

without spending any penny for their training and

education

from underdeveloped

countries

which in fact becoming a suicidal condition for those underprivileged nations as they are losing well-trained individuals as well funding which spends on their training.The ratio of

professionals

to citizens gets going up with decreasing quality of care and

education

in these

countries

. some of those migrants send money back home for their families and invest in local communities which is a positive impact on the home side. the solution to stop

this

immigration is to offer better remuneration in local

countries

as well as taking bond for working in the country for 5 or 7 years after completion of training,

further

allowing those

professionals

working in foreign

countries

during their vacations or part-time with their present job in the native country,

additionally

big fines and total recovery of

education

funds from migrating netizens. On the other ,hand developed

countries

should invest a large sum of money for developing infrastructure in those poor nations and in ,addition they can send their faculties as a visiting trainer in

such

countries

which improve their standard of

education

. These are some points which I can suggest at

this

point and keep them updating in the future

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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