Smacking children is the best form of discipline. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a number of
ways
to
discipline
children
and the most unwelcomed but highly prevalent way is physical punishment and some considering it as the best form of
discipline
for
children
with which I completely disagree and
further
elaborate in
this
essay my thinking about
this
form of
discipline
and why I am against it.
Discipline
children
in early periods of development from 1 to 12 years are one of the toughest jobs and every parent and teacher in the education field will agree with me. Everyone finds different
ways
of tackling it like providing examples of good behaviour,rewarding for showing positive characteristics like getting excellent grades or completing the assignments with the best review ,some will go with omitting available or upcoming treats for negative behaviour or poor performance ,
additionally
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some use physical punishment like smacking and other physical
ways
of harming
children
. smacking shows the short temperament of the person and,
therefore
it gives a negative message
instead
of giving positive outcomes,
furthermore
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it threatens them and
children
start doing things under fear of physical torture which damages their developing mind and after repeated , the exposure they get used to it and start behaving more destructive
ways
,or become depressive if can not withhold the pressure. So in the end slapping brings more harm than benefits to
children
in term of physical and mental health as well as the way they adopt home or school environment and grow up as an adult in future because they will apply the same treatment to their future kids the way they got treated which is worst.
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