Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Advertisement has always been a crucial role in the world of marketing. The way they try to convey a message
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to change throughout the decade whether via television or through online platforms. The goal of advertising is to get consumers to buy a targeted product.
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method has been proven successful in general while some
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think
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scheme can not catch the consumer’s attention
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. Advertising could be a powerful tool inviting
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of consumers into buying some curtain products. Because of the tactics placed in the message’s presentation. Some catchy slogans and recognisable jingles could be
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for decades if
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rhyme impressed
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.
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designed phrase might not be successful in a short period of time. It has to be heard repetitively until recognised
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audience.
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, “Just Do It” Nike’s well-remembered line which
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on most of
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ad and purchased goods.
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, after watching thousands of
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people
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will see it as a daily routine and decreasing attention that
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to them. In fact, some
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may even choose to turn
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off just to avoid repetitive
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. The main goal of
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is not complete since the
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the messages are sent out
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do not receive
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messages. In social media
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Youtube is the prime example. They attempt to place an ad before and between videos hoping
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would
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to watch it.
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,
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since
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would just click
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ad button and continue the video. In conclusion,
advertisements
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can be successful at persuading customers to purchase goods and services or can be unsuccessful in many ways.
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, advertising must be designed and presented in the correct way for
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effectively result.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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