Some people enjoy change and look forward to new experiences. Others like their lives to remain the same and do not like any changes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some
believe
in exploring and innovating new things in Replace the word
belief
life
. Others avoid the change and love to live a
existed lifestyle. In Change the article
an
this
essay
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,essay
i
will discuss both views and argue my support with Change the capitalization
I
former
view.
On the one hand, there are few Add an article
the former
people
who are excited to take advantages
of adventurous Fix the agreement mistake
advantage
life
such
as trevelling
new Correct your spelling
travelling
placesses
, testing variety of Correct your spelling
places
processes
cusion
, Correct your spelling
cushion
differe
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different
field
of work; study and even business. Fix the agreement mistake
fields
Moreover
, when people
experiment something
different Change preposition
with something
definately
it comes with risk, in spite of Correct your spelling
definitely
associated
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the associated
threat
, these individuals spend their time to experience and feel thrilled doing something innovative and totally Fix the agreement mistake
threats
differ
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different
than
the old Change preposition
from
life
. For example
, trip
to Add an article
a trip
the trip
antartica
, south pole and taking decision Correct your spelling
Antarctica
decision
to climb mount Remove the redundancy
apply
everest
. Change the capitalization
Everest
Therefore
, in my thinking people
should enjoy their time by experimenting and exploring things in different
Change the article
a different
way
.
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ways
On the other hand
, there are certain persons who busy
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are busy
to continue
the old one. They avoid trying different Change the verb form
continuing
life
. They beleive
it is more enjoyable to live a traditional Correct your spelling
believe
lives
than Fix the agreement mistake
life
Correct article usage
an innovative
innovative
, which can result in Correct pronoun usage
oneinnovative
mess
. Add an article
a mess
Furthermore
, these people
do not even think about change in their personal life
as well as in professional life
such
as many business
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businessman
man
still do not automate their job and get work done manually. They feel using technology could harm the existing style and can create Change to a plural noun
men
hastle
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hassle
instead
of Correct your spelling
learning
leaning
new things. Correct your spelling
learning
For instance
, a family businessman has an accountant to keep their financial record in paper
ledger manually Correct article usage
a paper
instead
of buying new technology, which could help to get work done fast and accurately. They avoid change in their way of spending time.
In conclusion, although
some people
are more prone to averse threat and not open to opportunity or taking life
to next
level, i
believe trying technique and unique way of living Change the capitalization
I
life
thrills me and give reality to others as well.Submitted by laxmithapa2921 on
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