Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situation. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some
people
would think that accepting
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th e
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worst phase of
life
like
financial
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crisis or
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job, is a better option for mental peace and serenity.
However
,
this
essay agrees that fighting back to come out
from
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negative
situation
is the crucial option for achieving growth and success On one hand, as
people
want psychological peace and
stress free
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life
, they consider
to accept
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the negative circumstances as a part of
life
and it would go away
by
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time. So they prefer
to
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not to do anything to mitigate
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and give time.
This
attitude makes their mind calm and productive.
For instance
, a recent survey of Times of India shows that due to Covid 19 pandemic, 40%
people
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have lost their job and suffered from
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economic
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. Among the 40% of
people
, 15% masses have started their own business and could able to survive
this
situation
by not panicking and being calm by positive thinking.
However
,
this
needs to have lots of patience and
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have not . On other hand, men and women do not believe to give up easily and try to come out
from
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negative
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situation
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.
This
approach makes them
to
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grow more and give success ahead. By working round the clock to shine again and get triumph.
For example
, Neeraj
chopra
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,
gold
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medalist in Olympic 2020, had suffered from
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spinal injury and had not enough money for surgery. Though he continuously put efforts to achieve his goal and he never gave up
of
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his dream
although
he had no support from his family and local government.
Such
kind of audacity and dedication gives lots of courage to fight for our rights and
life
. In conclusion,
by
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approaching the
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down side
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of
life
with accepting it, gives more productivity , patience and less mental stress,
however
, I still believe that
people
have to show courage and keep trying until they turn the table.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Contentment
  • Resilience
  • Personal growth
  • Endurance
  • Initiative
  • Advancement
  • Catalyst
  • Financial stability
  • Status quo
  • Innovation
  • Missed opportunities
  • Life satisfaction
  • Adverse situations
  • Taking control
  • Risk assessment
  • Change management
  • Self-improvement
  • Motivation
  • Stagnation
  • Proactivity
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