Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situation. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some
people
would think that accepting Use synonyms
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worst phase of Correct your spelling
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a financial
boring
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situation
is the crucial option for achieving growth and success
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time. So they prefer Change preposition
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situation
and give time. Add an article
the situation
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For instance
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people
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people
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the majority
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situation
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situations
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approach makes them Linking Words
to
grow more and give success ahead. By working round the clock to shine again and get triumph. Change the verb form
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gold
medalist in Olympic 2020, had suffered from Correct article usage
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traumatic
spinal injury and had not enough money for surgery. Though he continuously put efforts to achieve his goal and he never gave up Correct article usage
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of
his dream Change preposition
on
although
he had no support from his family and local government. Linking Words
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life
.
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by
approaching the Change preposition
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downside
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life
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