. You have bought a new home recently and you want to hire an interior decorator. Write a letter to the interior decorator seeking information about his services. In your letter • let him know how you came to know about his work/name • specify about your condominium {flat) • discuss your furnishing taste

#home #decorator #information #services #work #name #condominium #{flat #taste

Dear Paul, I am writing

this

letter to seek information about your services and provide me

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ballpark estimate for my project. At the onset, one of my friends,

Ms.

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Suman, gave

reference

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your work. She spoke high about your skills as an interior designer and your professionalism while working on a project.

Therefore

, I would request you to share some samples of your

last

assignments. Let me give details about my flat. I have bought a flat in Green Apartment, near North Avenue road. The house has three

bedroom

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, a kitchen and a living room. I wanted to get it

decorate

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before the house welcoming party which is due

month.

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, I wanted to have

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stylish fabric and leather sofas,

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along side

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with

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chairs, hanging lights, wooden floor, and interior plants decoration in the living area. Since I love gardening, I desired to have a balcony garden with flowers plants, vegetables, near the kitchen area. I

await

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for

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your response and looking forward to

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details on the estimated budget and required documents. Yours faithfully, Nikita.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

180 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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