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. You have bought a new home recently and you want to hire an interior decorator. Write a letter to the interior decorator seeking information about his services. In your letter • let him know how you came to know about his work/name • specify about your condominium {flat) • discuss your furnishing taste

#home #decorator #information #services #work #name #condominium #{flat #taste
Dear Paul, I am writing
this
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a
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ballpark estimate for my project. At the onset, one of my friends,
Ms.
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 Suman, gave
reference
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about
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 your work. She spoke high about your skills as an interior designer and your professionalism while working on a project.
Therefore
, I would request you to share some samples of your
last
 assignments. Let me give details about my flat. I have bought a flat in Green Apartment, near North Avenue road. The house has three
bedroom
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, a kitchen and a living room. I wanted to get it
decorate
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 before the house welcoming party which is due
next
 month.
Furthermore
, I wanted to have
a
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stylish fabric and leather sofas,
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along side
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with
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chairs, hanging lights, wooden floor, and interior plants decoration in the living area. Since I love gardening, I desired to have a balcony garden with flowers plants, vegetables, near the kitchen area. I
await
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for
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your response and looking forward to
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 details on the estimated budget and required documents. Yours faithfully, Nikita.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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