The popularity of dead languages such as Latin and ancient Greek in schools is declining, as many people consider their study to be a waste of time and funding. How does the study of dead languages add to academic and personal development? Why might some people feel that funds could be better allocated?

The famousness of the ancient
languages
like
Latin
and old Greek in colleges and schools is decreasing, as numerous kinds of people believe that studying them is a waste of time. I agree with the
first
idea
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because it has a lot of opportunities for developing science in colleges.
This
essay will discuss how we going to use ancient
languages
for discovering science purposes.
Initially
, it is not easy to add dead
languages
into lessons, so it is a kind of difficult task to find specialists with high
experiences
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. As we can understand, there are no people who know or teach
Latin
and Greek, because of the lack of use. Scientists will use them for academic purposes as
Latin
has been used in studies in ancient times by researchers.
For instance
,
explorer like
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Isaak Newton was a popular physician lived in
16th
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century wrote his own books in
Latin
words. I want to say that these books contain a lot of scientific terms that
are not exists
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in English.
Furthermore
, governments can allocate money for the development of old
languages
as I said
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scientific reasons. If authorities distribute a lot of money for developing them, we will create our world better.
For example
, the best engineers
of
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the world can invent a new type of
cars
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that could not harm
environment
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or doctors will find a new type of vaccine for bad diseases like Ebola.
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authorities are responsible for allocating finances. In conclusion, it is
superb
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idea to add ancient
Latin
and Greek
languages
for academic reasons, because they are useful in science. If we will try to add them in schools, I will not argue our attempt will be successful.
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