Some people say that staying in a hotel in a foreign country when on holiday is not the best way to get to know about the country and its people. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays more and more
people
like to travel abroad and some
people
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argue
agree
that the tourist cannot learn about the
cultre
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culture
of the
country
while
stay
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in the
hotel
. I completely agree with
this
point of view, because if you want to understand the city well you need to learn the
culture
of the local
people
, eat the local
food
and
finnaly
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finally
is understand the local
language
so it is
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possible
in the
hotel
. To be honest, the best way to understand
about
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a
country
is to understand
about
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the
cultrue
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culture
of
nation
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the nation
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. And to learn the
culture
of a new
country
we have to interact with the locals. Because, when staying in the
hotel
most of them are tourists from many different countries and there are no locals. So you will not be able to find out
their
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country
. But when you rent a house in the countryside you will easily meet the locals and talk to them.
For example
, at hotels in Gree, which is very rare in the locality, tourists cannot learn about the
culture
while staying at the
hotel
so they often choose houses in the countryside.
On the other hand
, to understand a
country
we need to understand part of their
language
and enjoy their traditional
food
. Most
hotel
staff are mostly speaking English and even they come from many countries. So it will be very difficult for you to understand the
country
if you do not understand their
languge
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language
. The important thing is that the
hotel
will be very limited in cooking local dishes because they do not specialize in even the ingredients and processing methods have changed to suit tourists.
Therefore
, To understand a
country
we need to understand part of their
language
and enjoy their traditional
food
.
For example
, when
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traveled
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in China the
hotel
all the time speak English and we always eat western
food
. In conclusion, staying in a
hotel
will not help us understand the real
culture
of a
country
. In my opinion, to understand a
country
you have to directly interact with local
people
to understand part of the
language
and enjoy their traditional
food
.
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