Some believe that people should make efforts to fight climate change while others think it is better to learn to live with it.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some advocate that
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in human activities can save global warming. In
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both views and support my opinion with examples. On the one hand,
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in weather is increasing every moment and harming creatures ,some believe that it is huge and out of human control. It is a cause of natural process which is not a part of
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effort ,so it is better to learn live with
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the planet have their own life work, study, business and family, so they can not take part
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matter.
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and needs to be eradicated by
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. It is a collective action of
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towards
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nature, so it is possible to control through a collective effort. Individuals can request
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to make strong rules and
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against climate
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to research more how to reduce the effect of emitted gas, or
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who can invent equipment and
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which could stop carbonemmision on the way to
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there can be
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invention which can save
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by observing the
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and chemicals. In conclusion,
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have limited control over natural disasters, there are many things
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can be done by people's attempt to reduce the effect of climate
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