Some believe that people should make efforts to fight climate change while others think it is better to learn to live with it.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some advocate that
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climate
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in human activities can save global warming. In
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both views and support my opinion with examples. On the one hand,
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in weather is increasing every moment and harming creatures ,some believe that it is huge and out of human control. It is a cause of natural process which is not a part of
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growing issues.
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the planet have their own life work, study, business and family, so they can not take part
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environmental
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effect of
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and needs to be eradicated by
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. It is a collective action of
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nature, so it is possible to control through a collective effort. Individuals can request
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to make strong rules and
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against climate
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to research more how to reduce the effect of emitted gas, or
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who can invent equipment and
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machinery
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as
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there can be
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by observing the
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toxins
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have limited control over natural disasters, there are many things
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can be done by people's attempt to reduce the effect of climate
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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