The number of cars has increased significantly in major cities. What problems does this cause and what are some solutions to these problems?

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should we use genetically modified
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technology helps us to sell more and better quality
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. I personally agree with all these concerns, I think it’s obvious that
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crops have a lot of benefits But we must control the process and reduce the risks.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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