Some believe that people should make efforts to fight climate change while others think it is better to learn to live with it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Since the origin of mankind, we have been a part of mother

nature

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. But, not like the other species on the planet,

humans

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are interrupting its natural flow and changing

nature

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as per their requirements. These activities have made an impact on the original balance of

nature

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and

climate

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changes are the key output of it. While some nations working on challenging

climate

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change, some believe that the most suitable option is to get used to coping up with it. The institutions that fight against

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change have to invest a huge amount of money in experiments.

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includes the infrastructure cost, solution cost and testing cost too.

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, it is hard to predict the changes in temperature in the

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fifty or hundred years. So, whatever solutions we come up with at present, might not be viable in future.

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has become a never-ending process now. People have started to worry about the future,

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of enjoying the present moment, which is another sad situation. Meantime, all the other species have been gradually adapting to the changes in the

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. Even

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capable of doing it and

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what we have been doing throughout the generations.

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content, other animals are a step

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the

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. The genetic generations have to be evolved to withstand the challenges in the coming period. It will only happen if

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are exposed to the present hardships.

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, the future community will be a prisoner of the controlled environment which is created by themselves and none of them will ever live freely in the open air like us. The

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and

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have been changing since our origin on the planet and we are as a species, so lucky to exist even after thousands of years.

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because of adaptation and evolution. So, in my opinion, the better option is to live with

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change

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of stand against it.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

climate change
mitigate
renewable energy
afforestation
sustainable practices
extreme weather events
carbon emissions
infrastructure
agricultural practices
moral responsibility
ecosystems
green jobs
economic growth
job losses
poverty alleviation
quality of life
proactive measures
balanced approach
green technology
unavoidable impacts

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Some believe that people should make efforts to fight climate change while others think it is better to learn to live with it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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Task 2 People live longer in some part of the world. What do you think is the reason of this? Is this a good thing or a bad thing?