Some educators believe that every child should be taught how to play a musical instrument. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the present era, many schools have started one class for extra curriculum subjects. Few educators think that all youngsters should know musical instruments. I partially agree with the given notion. In
this
essay, I will argue, why only music
is not important.
On the one hand, music
has a myriad of benefits. Firstly
, it helps in cognitive development. Children
study many subjects due to that; they feel stress and instrument give them peace and relaxation. It needs eye-hand coordination that is
also
useful for manual works. Secondly
, does this
enhance brain activities? Definitely yes! New skills are always useful in increasing the brain’s functions. Due to that, many people think it should connect with other subjects. For instance
, according to Oxford, it is provided that, children
who learnt new equipment shown better academic performance compare to those youths who did not learn a single musical instrument. Hence
, it has useful in the study as well as personality development.
On the other hand
, all youngsters are different in terms of nature, personality and hobbies. It is evident that,
always it has adverse effects if something is forceful. Remove the comma
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Therefore
, children
should help in recognising their interest by parents or teachers. Moreover
, they can be benefited in future. For example
, there are many shows on television that are related to dance, music
, singing. Youngsters participate and enjoy their talent. except ,
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music
there are immense functions that can enhance inner happiness.
In conclusion, few people feel children
must know at least one instrument. I have discussed, for study, peace and pleasure, cognitive development, it is useful. But all children
are different and they can not like music
. People should not force to learn only particular activities. It can have adverse effects.Submitted by namita.sinha25 on
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