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Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are marries or single. some people say this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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The supporting people think that the employer definitely asks for it interviews about the personal details
then
 only they can conduct their ability of different aspect which is very helpful for the employees allocating time
for instance
 if interviewees have more skills
such
 as drawing
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therefore
 they can easily appoint for their particular section.
On the other hand
 ,believes that the time of interview and curing personal information
such
 as marital status family status and living status
hence
 it is badly affected the opportunity of job for the intelligent person,
for example
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 employee had a newborn baby for pregnant stage their
this
 they don't admit
this
 person for the company they ask you that
this
 type of people give importance to their family compared to the work. In ,conclusion employees have more about different aspects which is need for the upcoming of the company so the manager can easily understand the qualities at the time of the interview,
therefore
, asking personal in information is relevant things
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • job application
  • personal information
  • hobbies and interests
  • marital status
  • relevant
  • useful
  • privacy
  • assessing candidates
  • qualifications
  • experience
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