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Some people think that young people should be required to do unpaid work helping people in the community. Are disadvantages of this requirement greater than the benefits for the community and individuals?

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Many
such
 as, old, handicapped and homeless
people
 around us require our
support
 in terms of money, shelter or daily household work, which can only be managed with the
support
 of other human beings. Some have,
therefore
, suggested the youth population for
this
 purpose. In
this
 essay, I will outline the perceived drawbacks of doing so, and explain why I feel that there are far more significant advantages. Community service by a person needs a lot of
time
 and
support
 from their family and workplace. Clearly, when
people
 indulge themselves in these types of activities, it is a commitment and they have to spare
time
 whatsoever is the situation and today's busy lifestyle does not permit it. Another aspect is balancing workplace life, family and helping
people
.
Hence
, they need specific attention towards them, as it is not possible for every youth to be at the same level.
On the other hand
, helping behaviour will definitely bring out a better generation. Helping other in bad
time
 will improve emotional quotient of the young generation and will make them a better human being.
Also
, due to
this
, there will be enough
support
 available, if every youth is ought to do volunteer jobs.
Therefore
, the problem of availability of the
support
 staff will not be there and there will not be any
people
 left without help. In conclusion, though community service requires
time
 and management of relationships at work, home and help centres, it will result in improved
next
 generation and a better world where all needs can be helped. In my view,
this
 should be a continuous task and it should be made mandatory for younger ones due to its more advantages.
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