A friend has agreed to stay in your flat (apartment) and look after it while you are away. You want to give your friend some information about the flat. Write a letter to this freind. In your letter: · Give information about the flat · Provide any important instructions · Say what he/she should do if there are any problems

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Dear Yash I hope you are doing absolutely fantastic! I really appreciate your kind gesture of staying in my apartment and taking care of it,

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I'm unavailable during the weekend. my apartment is on the 3rd floor and the unit number is 303. It has a digital lock system

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and uses a keypad to open the main door by applying the 8934 code and pressing enter on the touchpad.

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, you can use all the amenities available in my house, I have a 55 55-inch smart TV with a Play-station where you can watch and play different types of games and movies. In my fridge, I have stored many soft drinks, fruits, ice cream and other frozen food packets. which you can have without any hesitation.

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, when you're here you've got to check out my balcony attached to my bedroom. it's a hidden gem with a laid-back atmosphere and charm all its own. you can see the buildings and skyline of the downtown. In case, you face any problem regarding the apartment, dial 8007290,

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receptionist and they are available 24/7 to help all the tenants. Please let me know if you need more advice or help from my side, I'm hoping that you will enjoy your stay at my place. Yours truly, Vairag

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language

There are some minor grammatical errors, such as in the phrase 'are doing absolutely fantastic'. Consider rephrasing to 'are doing absolutely fantastically' to improve accuracy.

language

In the sentences 'In case, you face any problem regarding the apartment, dial 8007290, this number is for receptionist', it could be refined to 'In case you face any problem regarding the apartment, you can dial 8007290, the receptionists are available 24/7'.

content

The letter provides clear and comprehensive information regarding the flat, instructions, and what to do if there are problems.

language

The use of a friendly and suitable tone throughout the letter makes it very engaging and pleasant to read.

structure

Each paragraph addresses a specific point required by the task, contributing to a clear structure.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

219 words

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