Nowadays more and more people have to compete with young people for the same jobs. What problems does this cause? What are some possible solutions?
These days high number of
people
are competing with young
generations for Correct article usage
the young
same
jobs. The main problems associated with it are mental health issues and demotivation at Correct article usage
the same
work
, and the most viable solutions are advertising jobs with different classifications and giving equal opportunity to both generations. The main problem caused by competition on same
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the same
job
in two different generations is lack
of sense of belonging in Correct article usage
the lack
work place
. Fighting for the same Correct your spelling
the workplace
job
title with young people
, senior people
will not feel valued which will ultimately result in mental health issues in them. Another vital problem is aged
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that aged
people
will be unemployed. As these people
have more experience compare
to Wrong verb form
compared
young
group, competing with junior make them demotivated Add an article
the young
on
their Change preposition
in
work
and as a
result
these groups will be much happier just Add a comma
result,
to stay
at home. To tackle Change the verb form
staying
this
problem related authority
should advertise the Fix the agreement mistake
authorities
job
with different classification
. Doing soFix the agreement mistake
classifications
,
will allow Remove the comma
apply
people
to choose where their experience and qualification
perfectly Fix the agreement mistake
qualifications
fits
in and apply for that Wrong verb form
fit
job
. In Australia, all employer
have different categories for each of the jobs they advertise with different position levels and requirements so that all different age groups have equal opportunity of employment, Fix the agreement mistake
employers
for instance
. In conclusion, racing with young group
of Fix the agreement mistake
groups
people
for the same work
title, older ones go through mental health problems and face unemployment. However
, it can be address
through equal Change the verb form
be addressed
job
opportunity and appropriate job
classification.Submitted by Raksha on
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