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Some people believe that studying in a college or university is the best way for students to prepare for their future career. Others think they should leave school as soon as possible to develop their career through work experience. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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It is commonly believed that
student
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students
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 should have as much experience as possible to have success in their professional life
instead
 of
become
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becoming
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 a graduated or
upergraduated
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undergraduate
student
. The advantage of
develop
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 skills versus the identification of
student
 vocation
make
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 me believe that the balance is essential. On the one hand, the majority of the students that have the opportunity to attend a university are introduced to a wide range of subjects. With
these information
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, it is easier to identify a vocation.
For example
, the information technology area has many possible sub-areas, so it is quite difficult to be
envolved
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involved
 in all of them at once.
Therefore
, choosing the field that most matches
with
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one’s personality would direct them to a better path.
On the other hand
, not only the theory presented in the college is important to be a good professional. The practice is crucial to improve what was learned in class and to
aprimorate
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primate
 the skills. People with a lot of experience tend to be well visible in the
maket
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market
, which gives more chance to find a job.
However
, the certification has
also
 a big value for multinational companies. To conclude, there are many benefits in having a degree and
also
 in have a large work history. In my opinion, the best way is
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manager
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 both parameters together, giving the
student
 the possibility to be in the university and
also
 to be a trainee in a company. In my case, I
woudn’t
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wouldn't
 have been able to work abroad if I have not completed my degree.
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