The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?

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The rise of tourism has played a major role in promoting English
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. It is thought by some people that
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would eventually predominate English over other languages which would result in
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disappearance of the latter. While there are many advantages of having a common
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like
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understanding between countries as well as economic growth, there are certain
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as well. There are several advantages of promoting a single
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language
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would mean one-
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, i.e. when the whole
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starts speaking
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there would be more equality.
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, when all the members of the family talk
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there would be better understanding among them, keeping them bonded together.
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, all the people of the
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would come under one
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,
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economic growth. When the barrier of
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is pulled down, there would be interconnectedness resulting in
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of trade. Increasing trade would ultimately improve the income of the country. It is said that every coin has
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, despite
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all the advantages there are a few
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setbacks
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set backs
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as well. Languages are directly linked to
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, having a single
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would eventually replace all other languages,
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replacing their
culture
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. Diversity of
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is one of the joys in the
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, different cultures and traditions
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what makes it a unique place.
Disappearance
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of them would mean
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blandness. Another major
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draw back
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is that if the entire
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has the same
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,
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there won't be anything
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to explore in
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world
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could lead to a stagnation of tourism. Many countries that are dependent on tourism for their income would face economical
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. In conclusion,
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there are many plus points in unifying the
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we must protect the diverse
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,
culture
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and traditions for the upcoming generation to stay rooted to their grounds.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Prominent
  • Contribute
  • Global
  • Advantages
  • Disadvantages
  • Communication
  • Understanding
  • Ease
  • Business
  • Trade
  • Cultural exchange
  • Unity
  • Access
  • Information
  • Simplify
  • Travel
  • Tourism
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