The popularity of dead languages such as Latin and ancient Greek in schools is declining, as many people consider their study to be a waste of time and funding. How does the study of dead languages add to academic and personal development? Why might some people feel that funds could be better allocated?

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Several famous dead
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as Latin and ancient Greek in school programs spend less time year by year, the reason for circumstance individuals suppose to learn their
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to spend of time and waste much money.
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opportunities
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dead
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academic and personal skills, and suggestions that these funds should be spent in another area. Learning an ancient
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can improve memory and social communication. The scientists claimed that
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of new vocabulary
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diminished risk of dementia.
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,
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will be older
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struggle
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diseases. Some modern
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were
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construct from dead
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,
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current Kazakh
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was based
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one old
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learner
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can understand plenty of other
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and cultures. “Since the
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is dying out why not stop funding it
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” think many people and
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recommend others stop pay money for developing
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