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some people feel that entertainers are paid too much money do you agree or disagree which other types of jobs should be highly paid ?

#people #entertainers #money #jobs
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 universal fact , each and every individual thinks that he/ she is underpaid . But when it comes to actors or cricketers I personally feel that they are provided more than they genuinely deserve. I totally agree that cricketers
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 to practice for
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 duration and they have to maintain their fitness as well as actors have to wear prosthetic makeup for long periods , have to rehearse
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 scripts and act every scene with perfect expression though they are paid much more than other hardworking professionals. Entertainers
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 in
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 luxurious and comfortable life and they are provided security too.
On the other hand
 who secures the whole nation "army professionals " are given
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 amount of wages . They are the real heroes of the country so they deserve much more respect and must be
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felicitated
 with
highest
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 amount of salary and
also
 security for their family's future needs . Sometimes I genuinely feel that most hardworking, talented and
skillfull
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skilful
 people are not provided as much they deserve, At
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 I wish every person should be paid according to their working hours, their mental and physical ability as well as their skills and knowledge. In every
profession
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 every individual must be paid according to their eligibility .
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