Nowadays we see more advertisements on the streets and on our TV screens. What are the advantages and disadvantages of it?

Today adverts on our social media platforms,telecast and

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on the streets have increased greatly ,

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essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the same. Advertisements have skyrocketed everywhere be it on the social platforms,media and on our streets,

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has been reported on our phones as well

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becoming a source of income for a number of people,commercials have become the new norm in promoting products for sale in

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today's

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society,use of advertisement has become more of guide to shoppers because it gives in details what a particular product contains and the benefits that come with it ,most goods on promotion are either sold at a cheaper or if it is expensive there is an option of

buy

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one get one or buy one and get a gift on top of your purchase,

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around

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season most products are sold at either half price or with a gift on top ,an advantage of purchasing goods while on notice is it is cheaper and you get more for less.

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Publicising of

commodoties

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commodities

and services is an integral part in our daily lives but it

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comes with its downfalls,

commodoties

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commodities

on display does not necessarily mean they are

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or will attract customers most people will concentrate on basic needs rather than luxury with the economic hardships being experienced around the globe impulse buying is not a factor keeping in mind every coin counts and has to be utilized to the latter.

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advertisements

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electronics and

alcohol

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are

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not a

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requirement.Alcohol ,

cigarrete

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cigarette

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,are not healthy notices and should be limited.

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promotion of products and services is a guide on purchasing goods and sometimes it saves on the budget,but wrong publicity has found its way in our living rooms,streets,places of work and at schools

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causing a rift in our community,the government needs to find a way of controlling especially bad adverts that ruin and cause moral decay to our children and society at large.