Nowadays we see more advertisements on the streets and on our TV screens. What are the advantages and disadvantages of it?

Today adverts on our social media platforms,telecast and
also
on the streets have increased greatly ,
this
essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the same. Advertisements have skyrocketed everywhere be it on the social platforms,media and on our streets,
this
has been reported on our phones as well
thus
becoming a source of income for a number of people,commercials have become the new norm in promoting products for sale in
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today's
todays
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society,use of advertisement has become more of guide to shoppers because it gives in details what a particular product contains and the benefits that come with it ,most goods on promotion are either sold at a cheaper or if it is expensive there is an option of
buy
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one get one or buy one and get a gift on top of your purchase,
for instance
around
christmas
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season most products are sold at either half price or with a gift on top ,an advantage of purchasing goods while on notice is it is cheaper and you get more for less.
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Publicising of
commodoties
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commodities
and services is an integral part in our daily lives but it
also
comes with its downfalls,
commodoties
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commodities
on display does not necessarily mean they are
fast moving
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or will attract customers most people will concentrate on basic needs rather than luxury with the economic hardships being experienced around the globe impulse buying is not a factor keeping in mind every coin counts and has to be utilized to the latter.
for example
advertisements
of
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electronics and
alcohol
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,alcohol
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this
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are
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not a
must have
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requirement.Alcohol ,
cigarrete
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cigarette
cigarettes
,are not healthy notices and should be limited.
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promotion of products and services is a guide on purchasing goods and sometimes it saves on the budget,but wrong publicity has found its way in our living rooms,streets,places of work and at schools
thus
causing a rift in our community,the government needs to find a way of controlling especially bad adverts that ruin and cause moral decay to our children and society at large.
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