Online shopping is significantly increasing. What effect does this have people, what are the demerits and job opportunities?

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Usage of online shopping is dramatically increasing now.
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effects
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the effects
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of shopping while sitting at home, its harm and provided job opportunities.
Digital
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The digital
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age did not leave aside the shopping, new technologies gave lots of new openings to
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sphere too.
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,
majority
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the majority
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of people orders clothes, food or other product by
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leaving their houses. Of
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it has its influence on the users, including good and side effects. By
the
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apply
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utilizing online shopping site or
apps
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you economize your time.
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, it is easy to choose by filter functions, you can look for all clothes in a short period of time.
Internet
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gives a possibility of switching between all shops that are located far from each other simultaneously. It is argued, that people are getting lazy. In the future, it is believed that ordinary people won’t even leave their houses, relaxing, going shopping and even working laying
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a sofa are possible.
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, it opened other opportunities, there are so many new professions that are based on working online. And shopping industry has been developed
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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