The demand of food is increasing worldwide. Why has it happened? What measures could the international community take to improve the situation?

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food
consumption worldwide is increasing. There
are
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big
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number of reasons
of
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why it happening. Two major factors are overpopulation and global warming,
that
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leads to hunger, local conflicts, obesity. But
this
problem is not a catastrophe and can be solved by few instructions. Nowadays people population is 7
billions
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, and in
next
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10
years
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this
number will rapidly grow. It
lead
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to increasing
of
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in
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food
consumption . In poor
african
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African
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countries with high population density like
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Angola, Nigeria , people suffer from hunger, local council and farmers cant provide enough provision. People
also
have
big
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indirect impact
in
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food
consumption increasing. Global warming, caused by humanity industry, lead to
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yield of crops. Destroying ecosystems disrupt
balance
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the balance
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in
landscape
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the landscape
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, which made
grow
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of agricultural crops is impossible.
However
, exist several
number
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of solving ways to deplete
this
problem.
Firstly
, humanity
need
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to keep a diet and stop buying
extra
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an extra
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meal . Competent distribution of
food
resources can decide climate, health issues.
Secondly
, stop deforestation and environmental pollution prevent global warming and climate change, which negative effect on agriculture
grow
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.
Thirdly
, using
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natural fertilisers have
big
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potential in receiving
high
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yield in
short
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deadline, but
slightly
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high price. In conclusion,
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demand
of
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for
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food
increasing worldwide is one of
modern
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a modern
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major
problem
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, which leads to significant consequences
,
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but can be solved by keeping
of
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simple
inctructions
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instructions
.
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