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University education should be free for all students. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is argued that college study should have no
fees
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 for every
student
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.
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 essay totally agrees with
this
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 statement because there is no value in free
education
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 and
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student
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students
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 should charge
fees
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 as per their family income. The primary reason for not
consideration
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 free is because there will be no value of free at the later stage. There are limited seats in specialization every year as per the merits and if some undergraduates get admission and
they
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drop
in
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out in
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 the middle of the semester
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they will get
other
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into other
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 universities or courses free of cost.
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, it will impact those students who did not get a chance because of low scores.
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, in
Indian
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India
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, many
governments
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government
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 institutions
such
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 as ITI,
CPAC
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and CPAC
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 provide free
education
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on
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the
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 result of high school
where
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many pupils leave the course during the year and those who did not get admission
due to
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 lower marks, will have to either wait for the next batch or move to choose another college. Another reason for not supporting free
education
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 is
because
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that
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 every
student
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 should be charged
fees
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 as per their parent's income slab. Every
student
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 has the right to study and fulfil their dreams in desired fields. Some rich people can afford higher
fees
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where
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they can put their children in any colleges and some
middles class
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middle-class
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 people have limited options for higher study.
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, in order to give an equal opportunity, admissions should be given on merits and income slabs.
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, one of the colleges in Ahmedabad, called 'Amruta
arts
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 and
commerce college
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Commerce College
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', gives admission on the basis of cut-off and
fees
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gets
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 charged as per the ITR file they file every year. In conclusion, students will consider free
education
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 very liberal and to provide the same opportunity, they should be taken money as per their family earnings.
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, I believe students should not provide free
education
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 after high school.

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task response
Ensure that your introduction clearly presents your position and outlines the points you will discuss in the body paragraphs.
coherence and cohesion
Use transition words and cohesive devices to link ideas within and between paragraphs. Ensure that there is a clear progression of ideas throughout the essay.

Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

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...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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