University education should be free for all students. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that college study should have no
fees
for every
student
.
This
essay totally agrees with
this
statement because there is no value in free
education
and
student
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students
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should charge
fees
as per their family income. The primary reason for not
consideration
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free is because there will be no value of free at the later stage. There are limited seats in specialization every year as per the merits and if some undergraduates get admission and
they
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drop
in
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the middle of the semester
considering
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they will get
other
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universities or courses free of cost.
As a result
, it will impact those students who did not get a chance because of low scores.
For example
, in
Indian
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India
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, many
governments
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government
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institutions
such
as ITI,
CPAC
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and CPAC
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provide free
education
on
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as
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the
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result of high school
where
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many pupils leave the course during the year and those who did not get admission
due to
lower marks, will have to either wait for the next batch or move to choose another college. Another reason for not supporting free
education
is
because
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that
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every
student
should be charged
fees
as per their parent's income slab. Every
student
has the right to study and fulfil their dreams in desired fields. Some rich people can afford higher
fees
where
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they can put their children in any colleges and some
middles class
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people have limited options for higher study.
Therefore
, in order to give an equal opportunity, admissions should be given on merits and income slabs.
For example
, one of the colleges in Ahmedabad, called 'Amruta
arts
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and
commerce college
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Commerce College
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', gives admission on the basis of cut-off and
fees
gets
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charged as per the ITR file they file every year. In conclusion, students will consider free
education
very liberal and to provide the same opportunity, they should be taken money as per their family earnings.
Therefore
, I believe students should not provide free
education
after high school.
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