Immigration has a major impact on the society. What are the main reasons of immigration? To what consequences can it lead?

Nowadays, moving to different places is increasing. Many
people
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the
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different
purpose
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purposes
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such
as
career
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specialized
specialised
education
. In
this
essay, the main reason for
immigration
and the consequences of
this
such
as
decrease
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a decrease
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in
number
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a number
the number
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of qualified
people
and high
population
density in
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a certain
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place
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places
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will be discussed in detail.
One
of the most trending
reason
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reasons
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for
immigration
is to look for
better
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life living. In search of
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job
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jobs
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and business
people
move
to different cities even countries so that they can live
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quality
life. Many
individulas
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individuals
when they finish their
education
, there is low
possibilities
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possibility
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to find technical and professional jobs in
local
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the local
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area eventually they seek
for
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an opportunity
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opportunity
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opportunities
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where
variety
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a variety
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of options are available.
For
example
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when
i
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finished my
education
i
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shift to
capital
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the capital
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city
of my country to work in a commercial bank where
i
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not only found an opportunity to
further
my professional
career
but
also
found personal living
standard
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standards
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. Another
reson
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reason
of
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immigrating man from
one
place
to another is to gain
next level
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education
since many small towns do not have colleges and universities where students get
higher level
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higher-level
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education
.
In addition
to that, when
scholar
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scholars
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looking for
specilized
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specialized
specialised
study
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studies
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such
as doctors, engineers, nurses and technological
field
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fields
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of studies they have
shift
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a shift
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nearby area of
university
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the university
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. Eventually, as soon as they finished their study they search for
career
job
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jobs
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to get settled down. For illustration, many
asian
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student
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students
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go to
USA
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the USA
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, Australia and London to
persue
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pursue
higher
education
and when they complete their university they get settled there.
Immigration
has many consequences that
includes
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qualified
people
decreases in the local area and undistributed
population
which create
big
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problem in the economy.
Furthermore
, when educated and qualified
people
leave local town in finding
career
and
education
, only unskilled and uneducated
people
will remain in
locality
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the locality
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which will
further
lead to
underlevelopment
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underdevelopment
of that location. For illustration,
weatern
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western
part of Nepal, Every
people
are educated,
although
the
place
is underdeveloped since all productive man
move
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to
central
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the central
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part of
nation
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the nation
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.
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Moreover
, when
people
move
from
one
place
to another
city
, the
population
density will be high in
immigrated
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the immigrated
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city
that will create a big economic problem
such
as
increase
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an increase
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in pricing and demand and
decrease
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a decrease
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in
supply
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the supply
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of daily needs. In conclusion,
people
move
from
one
village to another town,
city
even country for good reasons,
howver
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however
, it can imbalance the whole economy.
Thus
, it is wise to make some rules for
immigration
so that the
probles
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problems
created
from
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undistributed
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the undistributed
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population
could be solved on time.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic migration
  • Asylum seeker
  • Diaspora
  • Expatriate
  • Refugee status
  • Work permit/visa
  • Demographic shift
  • Naturalization
  • Xenophobia
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Multiculturalism
  • Social cohesion
  • Immigration policies
  • Border control
  • Undocumented immigrants
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