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Using a smartphone to make calls, send and receive emails, access the internet, and so on, has become an essential part of many people's lives. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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Technology impacts daily life and it has changed the ways of communication between
people
. Nowadays, most
of
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individuals
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 own a smartphone in which they are available to connect through phone calls, emails, and much more if they have wi-fi near. In my opinion, I completely agree with the position of advantages surpassing the disadvantages of using a smartphone. Regarding
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the numerous benefits, the main one is the possibility to communicate with
people
 around the world: family, friends, coworkers, clients. There is no person without a relative living in a different country than their so that the opportunity of being in touch
besides
 the distance, has been a gamechanger for families compared to the time in which
smartphones
 were not
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 the radar. During the pandemic,
smartphones
 were crucial to socialized while lockdown was
instaured
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installed
instituted
 around the whole world.
In addition
, remote work is now a tendency
although
 pandemic is controlled,
therefore
smartphones
 let
people
to
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be aware of what is happening in their jobs.
For instance
, I work remotely, but
also
 cook and raise a daughter; I would not be able to complete my responsibilities without my cellphone. It cannot be denied that face-to-face communication is missing importance, especially for young
people
 that
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 several occasions prioritizes internet connection
than
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 a family dinner, or kids cry to watch their youtube videos on the smartphone.
Nevertheless
, those are periods of life, and the parent's role is to manage these situations. The benefits and drawbacks of the use of
smartphones
 have been described through
this
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lives
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lifes
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.
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