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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want without paying. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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Today technologies enable us to read
books
 on electronic devices and what's more, we can store hundreds of thousands of
books
 on devices like Amazon's e-reader.
This
 makes some
people
 believe that
people
 will stop printing
books
 and in the future, everything will be digitalized. Electronic
books
 and
newspapers
 have many advantages. They are easy to use and reach. They can be stored in computers, mobiles, e-readers and in the cloud in huge amounts and are available at any. The cost of manufacturing and printing is completely removed, which reduced their price. Digital
books
 and
newspapers
also
 have one very important advantage-they are environmentally friendly. No paper is used to print
magazines
 and
books
, which means less is cut from our forests to produce papers. All of these factors convinced many
people
 that digital versions of
books
 and
magazines
 are more convenient, ethical and cheaper choices.
On the other hand
, traditional printed
books
 and
magazines
 have existed for centuries and I believe they have created some kind of emotional connection and
value
 for
people
. When a man reads a book and he likes it, he most probably would like to have it in a form of a tangible thing
Books
 are a form of art, like statues and paintings. You can have
a
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 of some famous painting, but the painting itself has some intangible
value
.
Magazines
 and
newspapers
 do not have
such
value
. Based on
this
, I believe that the
amount
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 of
books
 are printed will decrease considerably and maybe even dramatically,
however
, printed, tangible
books
 will still be demanded by
people
 as they have some aura and
value
in addition
 to the things that are written inside. I do think, though, that there is big chance
magazines
 and
newspapers
 will move into the online world completely.
This
 is because they are published in huge numbers daily and weekly and monthly and no one needs them after years. Printing
such
 a huge amount of articles will demand additional resources and make them less competitive even in terms of price.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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