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Many companies offer their employees the opportunity to work from home.discuss the merits and demerits of work from home to the company ,and give your own opinion

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Some organizations have given their workmen the chance to
work
 from their place .I strongly believe that
this
 system of working is beneficial to a
company
.
This
 essay will elaborate on the advantages in the
first
 half and the
second
 half will discuss the demerits.
First
 of all ,
this
approach
 can save the travelling
time
 of the employee which is ultimately beneficial for the
company
. If the travelling
time
 of the employee is saved ,
this
time
 can be utilised in the
work
 for the maximum output
moreover
, employees can
work
 in odd hours
also
 as per their convenience Some
time
 employees take leave for their personal issues but through
this
approach
, personnel can extend their hours of
work
 on other days and finish their
work
.
Thus
 companies revenue will increase Apart from
this
 operational cost of the companies will be reduced .due to
work
 from home ,rental
expenses
 , maintenance
expenses
,electricity
expenses
 will be cut down which is ultimately beneficial for the
company
 ,
moreover
 highly skilled staff can be recruited anywhere from the world .
for example
 ,if a
company
 recruits any staff from outside their country , an organization has to pay his travelling cost, living cost , the family allowance which will affect the profitability of the
company
On the other hand
 , many people will not be able to focus on their performance as they follow a casual
work
approach
 and are distracted by their family members.they don't get the assigned task efficiently which cause a negative impact on the
company
 reputation and productivity,
also
 at the workplace employees can share and discuss the innovative ideas but due to online
work
 physical connection is getting less , through
this
 discussion quality of
work
 will improve.ultimately it hampers the productivity of the organization To conclude if the productivity of the
company
 is flourished by saving operational
expenses
, travelling
time
 and reputed staff but on the other side due to the casual
approach
 of workers it
also
 has demerits
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