All students should study a foreign language in school, starting in their earliest grades. To What extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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many individuals that
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children
should
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to a foreign
language
other than their mother tongue early on,
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academic years. In my opinion, I completely agree with the proposed notion because
children
have greater learning ability at a very
younger
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age
.
Moreover
, when a foreign tongue is introduced early, they will not feel burdened by an additional subject in secondary
school
.
Children
have more potential to learn new stuff at a younger
age
.
This
is similar to infants who do not know any word when they are born, but quickly pick it up from their parents and adults.
For example
, in Sri Lanka, before the 1990s English
language
was introduced to
school
children
when they were in high
school
,
however
, after much
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the educators realized that primary
school
students were able to grasp it much faster in high
school
itself.
As a result
, it is more beneficial to
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language
skills
during
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their
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young
age
.
In addition
, high
school
students need to learn a plethora of advanced subjects during their academic years. If a foreign
language
is introduced,
in addition
to those subjects, it will be an extra burden for them, and they will have no
time
to master it by the
time
they are ready to graduate.
For instance
, the majority of Sri Lankan students do not choose to learn foreign
languages
such
as French,
Japanese
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, when
those
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are introduced to their Ordinary and
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level curriculum
due to
the extra effort required to master those
languages
within a shorter
time
period.
To sum up
,
children
have more potential to learn a new
language
when it is introduced at a young
age
.
Moreover
, it allows them more
time
to master foreign
languages
when those
languages
are introduced during their primary academic years.
Therefore
, I support the idea of introducing a foreign
language
to a child when he or she is more adaptable.
Submitted by Tharindu Saram on

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