Children ore facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social, and commercial, perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and which measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?

Nowadays,
children
have to face more and more
pressure
from academic, social and commercial challenges. There are several causes behind
this
phenomenon and
also
several implements which can reduce
stress
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the stress
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of
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children
. To commence with,
reason
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the reason
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behind
this
phenomenon. There are several causes
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that
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lead
pressures
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to pressures
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on
children
.
First
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and foremost reason is
comparison
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a comparison
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with
other student
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another student
other students
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. To explain it, parents
compares
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their kid's performance with other kid's in academic results and other perspectives. To exemplify, when people see the
hordings
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hoardings
hoarding
and advertisement of results they pressurise their
off-spring
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offspring
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to achieve that type of result.
Secondly
, busy schedule in student life. To explain it, from
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nursery
mercury
parents send their
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child
childs
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children
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into school and
also
in personal
tution
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tuition
classes. So,
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the student
a student
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student
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students
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can not get sufficient time for other
activities
such
as outdoor and indoor games. These are the main reason behind
pressure
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the pressure
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on
children
. There are several implements
which
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that
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tackle
this
problem.
Firstly
,
government
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the government
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should impose
stict
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strict
rules in
school's
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the school's
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timetable for some portion of extra activity rather than academic activity. These
type
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types
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of
activities
release
stress
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the stress
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of
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students and
also
get chances to show their skills in extra
activities
. So, they get chances to show and improve their other skills with
guidance
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the guidance
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of teachers in their interested area. These are the main implement
which
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can reduce
pressure
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the pressure
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of
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on
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children
. To conclude, these are some causes behind the
pressure
on
children
such
as
comparision
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comparison
with other students in academics and busy daily schedule of academics. Whereas steps
shoulid
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should
be taken to solve
this
problem
such
as strict rules in school for extra
activities
.
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