Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
Rise
in Add an article
The rise
A rise
price
of fossil Correct article usage
the price
fuel
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fuels
such
as petrol
is the
good way to reduce traffic and Correct article usage
a
pollution
problems. I partially agree with this
statement. There are some positive and negative aspects of hike in petrol
price
which will be discussed adequately in ensuing paragraphs.
To commence with, reason
behind Add an article
the reason
agreement
. Add an article
the agreement
First
and foremost reason is Correct article usage
The first
reduction
in Add an article
a reduction
the reduction
use
of fossil Add an article
the use
fuel
. Nowadays, Fix the agreement mistake
fuels
world
face Correct article usage
the world
crisis
of fossil fuel due to Correct article usage
a crisis
high
usage of petroleum Correct article usage
the high
products
. If petrol
price
is increasing then
it may be result
in less use of Change the verb form
result
petrol
that result
into less traffic problem and Change the verb form
results
pollution
. For example
, if price
of Add an article
the price
petrol
surged then
people change their way from private transport
to public transport
that automatically reduce
carbon Change the verb form
reduces
immision
and global warming problems. Correct your spelling
emission
immission
immersion
Secondly
, moving upward of petrol
price
increase revenue for the government. That revenue can be used for the latest and pollution free
public Add a hyphen
pollution-free
transport
system.
In contrast
, hike
in Correct article usage
a hike
price
of petroleum Add an article
the price
products
have
some negative impacts on society. Change the verb form
has
For example
, in rural
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a rural
the rural
area
of developing Fix the agreement mistake
areas
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countries
country
there are Add a comma
,country
not
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no
such
facilities of public transport
so, they rely on the
private Correct article usage
apply
transport
. In addition
, they have
not sufficient income to afford the rise in Add a missing verb
do have
petrol
price
. Secondly
, essential manufacturing companies have to use transportation
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a transportation
system
for Fix the agreement mistake
systems
the raw materials
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the transportation of the raw materials
the transportation of the raw material
transportation
. Increase
in Correct article usage
An increase
transportation
cost
leads Fix the agreement mistake
costs
costly
Change preposition
to costly
products
which also
affect middle class
society.
To conclude, there are several positives and negatives of Add a hyphen
middle-class
this
statement. Positive results of higher price
is
Change the verb form
are
reduction
in Add an article
a reduction
the reduction
pollution
and usage of local
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the local
a local
transport
system. Whereas negative results is
costly essential Change the verb form
are
products
and transportation
sytem
of rural area.Correct your spelling
system
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